I was catching up on The Legend Of Korra and there was a scene at the council where Tenzin says to Tarlock “this is just another one of your ploys to gain more power, isn’t it” and I honest to god groaned audibly
Most of the writing on Avatar is really solid and believable and not at all patronizing but every once in a while it does something to really drive home the fact that it is very much a show for children
Oh god yes I hated all of the political stuff in that ep
“Let’s get a task squad of benders and go and attack and capture non-benders who are trying to learn a valid way of defending themselves from bender crime. THAT WILL SURELY EASE ALL OF THIS UNREST”
The only adults in the show are Tenzin and Lin :I Tenzin is an airbender so he can stay calm about it but at least now we know why Lin is such a hardass, she’s surrounded by people whose political motivations are as deep and sophisticated as a soup spoon.
One of my biggest qualms with “Korra” has been the really bland and overly transparent writing. Unlike in A:TLA, where Mike and Bryan were joined by a team of writers who edited every script to give each character a really distinct voice, that is painfully lacking in “Korra.” (Mike and Bryan wrote all these episodes alone, and I’m sorry to say that the difference is painfully obvious as far as the dialogue goes.)
A comon piece of advice for writers is “show, don’t tell.” So far in Korra, nearly every bit of important information has been told through really rushed and impersonal dialogue. The only characters who have a really unique and personal voice are Tenzin’s kids, and they’re mostly for comedy.
It’s frustrating for me, because the lack of personality in the dialogue makes their conversations less relatable and less moving when they should be. And it does make the writing feel more like a kid’s show, when the characters say exactly what is on their mind in the most direct way possible, rather than saying it in a way that specific character would say it.
I understand that they are really rushed for time, because they have set up this incredibly complex story and want to introduce us to the new setting and characters and problems in the city ASAP, but… the story suffers for it. I will keep watching of course, mostly because I am completely enamored with Korra herself… but I kind of wish we had the old writers back to round out the dialogue as in A:TLA.
A-fucking-MEN to all of the above ^^^
T__T I miss the writing team so much.
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[Image: A picture of a tall, very thin Black woman with her shoulder over a shorter, older white man wearing traditional Orthodox Jewish clothing on a New York sideway.]
staghunts:
“This one is very serious, guys:
I came upon these two on the sidewalk. They were having a conversation. “Excuse me,” I said, addressing the girl: “I’m sorry to interrupt, but is there anyway I can take your photo?”
“Why would you want my photo?” she asked.
“Because you look beautiful,” I said. And she did. She was Sudanese. There is a very distinct beauty among people from the Sudan, and she was filled up with it. Suddenly the man cut in:
“I was just telling her she was beautiful,” he said.
Naively, I assumed I had just walked up on one stranger giving a compliment to another. I wanted to capture the moment. “Let me take your photograph together,” I said. The man seemed reluctant, he started smiling nervously and inching away. But the girl called him back.
“Come take a picture with me,” she said. Encouraged by her attention, he returned. She put her arm around him, and I took the photo.
As I examined the photos on my camera, the man started whispering to the girl. She answered him in a loud voice: “I told you! I’m not that kind of girl.” She seemed agitated now. Finally sensing that I had misread the situation, I stepped between them. The man began hurrying down the sidewalk.
When the man left, the girl’s demeanor changed completely. She seemed shaken. Her eyes were tearing up. “He just offered me five hundred dollars to go out with him,” she said. “And then when I said ‘no,’ he offered me one thousand. Why does this always happen to me?”
“It happens a lot?” I asked.
“All the time,” she said. “I’m sorry I’m getting emotional. I just can’t go out of my house without this kind of thing happening. I have a son. I’m a mother. I would never degrade myself like that. I just don’t understand why this keeps happening.”
“Do you mind if I tell this story?” I asked.
“Please,” she said. “Tell it.”
Let’s hope this man, and all men, realize the emotional damage they are inflicting on the women they try to buy. In the meantime, feel free to SHARE.*
Dear Tumblr, fuck you for trying to erase this.
I’m saving this post because as many times as Tumblr tries to erase this woman’s story and act like anything about this was okay, that’s as many times as I’m reposting it. They can either cut me off or stop being assnuggets about this. whichEVER.
i will always reblog this. because if this woman were white, the mass-erasure of this image and story would not be happening. and that just speaks volumes to me. the bigotry that contributes to this woman’s constant harassment is the same bigotry that led to the erasure of this story in order to ‘protect’ this man. they are COMPLETELY connected. this is a vicious cycle that perpetuates anti-blackness and the degradation and silencing of black women and women of color as a whole.
oh look trubr0wn just deployed more truth bombs.
i am the truth bomb terrorist.
FUCK YOU TUMBLR. I will reblog this every god damn twelve hours. You will NOT erase this woman’s story just because HONY is a bigot who is full of shit. Tumblr staff is full of shit. They are ALL full of shit. And fuck every single one of you shitty people for thinking that you’re going to win. You will NOT.
Hey this disappeared off my tumblr how strange
anyway, here it is again, supporting this lovely lady who has to put up with this crap just because she exists and goes outside, and to call shame on a society that would actually force her to put her arm around the creep who just upped his price after she told him that she wouldn’t whore for him
Here it is, calling attention to the FACT that the aggressor, the perpetrator of this outrage was the one protected, and the victim is just supposed to disappear
To that I say no
no
Open season on Black women is OVER.
I’m going to back up my Tumblr.
But I just want to see if Tumblr will ignore the e-mail I just wrote to them getting unwanted messages by users I’ve told to leave me alone and will send me another e-mail about “violating copyright,” if not try to delete my blog for reblogging this picture and story that needs to be seen and heard.
I’m not claiming ownership of anything, BTW. Picture, story behind the picture, and the erasure of the picture copyrighted2012 by humansofnewyork.tumblr.com . And reblogging this picture has an educational reason behind it — to show how black women are dehumanized, and then silenced if they ever speak out.
Tumblr deleted this post from everyone’s blog. Here it is again. And people have saved copies to their computers, including me. Story’s not going away. The internet is forever.
-Jess
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